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Error Correction

Which sentence is correct?

  • a.The whole event turned out to be a damp squid.
  • b.The whole event turned out to be a damp squib.
  • c.The whole event turned out to be a dump squib.
  • d.The whole event turned out to be a damp squick.

The idiom is 'a damp squib' (a firework that fails to go off, hence an anticlimax). 'Damp squid' is a widespread but incorrect corruption of it.

Error Correction

Which sentence is correct?

  • a.It is imperative that the report is submitted by Friday.
  • b.It is imperative that the report will be submitted by Friday.
  • c.It is imperative that the report submits by Friday.
  • d.It is imperative that the report be submitted by Friday.

After 'It is imperative that', formal English uses the mandative subjunctive 'be submitted'. The indicative 'is submitted' is a common but less accurate alternative at this register.

Error Correction

Which sentence is correct?

  • a.Reviewing the data, I noticed several anomalies.
  • b.Reviewing the data, several anomalies were noticed.
  • c.Reviewing the data, there were several anomalies.
  • d.Reviewing the data, the anomalies became noticeable to me.

The introductory participle 'Reviewing the data' must attach to the person doing the reviewing. Only 'I noticed' supplies that subject; the others leave the participle dangling.

Error Correction

Which sentence is correct?

  • a.Hardly I had sat down when the phone rang.
  • b.Hardly had I sat down than the phone rang.
  • c.Hardly had I sat down when the phone rang.
  • d.Hardly I had sat down than the phone rang.

'Hardly' fronted requires inversion ('had I sat down') and is completed by 'when', not 'than': 'Hardly had I sat down when...'. Both the inversion and the correlative must be right.

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